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Stains
Jul 18, 2018 11:39:37 GMT -6
Post by Brian on Jul 18, 2018 11:39:37 GMT -6
the broken clouds above,
used to be heart shaped,
now the red skies there,
are their endless bleeding,
some day blue will reign,
until then stains will spread,
touching horizons,
mimicking my soul.
Brian Paul Sullivan © 2011
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 18, 2018 12:37:57 GMT -6
Beautiful, Brian. I can feel the hope for the future.
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Stains
Jul 19, 2018 5:11:35 GMT -6
Post by Brian on Jul 19, 2018 5:11:35 GMT -6
Thank you Foxy.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 19, 2018 6:57:39 GMT -6
"some day blue will reign,"
It is always good to have some light when facing such darkness, Brian; powerful writing.
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Stains
Jul 20, 2018 1:52:19 GMT -6
Post by Brian on Jul 20, 2018 1:52:19 GMT -6
It is.
Thank you Rick.
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Stains
Oct 31, 2018 3:35:51 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Oct 31, 2018 3:35:51 GMT -6
It's like an oil painting with words. Awesome
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Oct 31, 2018 6:34:28 GMT -6
Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 31, 2018 6:34:28 GMT -6
Very poetic description, Michael.
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