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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 4, 2018 5:57:23 GMT -6
 The monster is anxious to be freed
Bad science created a bad seed;
Hyde shows no mercy to anyone...
Our arrangement must soon be done.
Hyde believes he has control of me
My mind is bent by his company;
I feel him in each alley and street...
His hideous heart, inside me beats.
I was a fool to experiment
So many hours in the lab were spent;
The monster is not invincible...
A classic twist, I aim to pull.
The transformation is now at hand
But not the usual one we planned;
I made a key change to the potion...
Added, a pinch of baby lotion!
I swallow it down and start to change
My Hyde persona has rearranged;
The townspeople shall be safe tonight...
Baby Hyde cannot cause any fright!
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Post by Brian on Jul 4, 2018 8:13:20 GMT -6
ROFL Rick,
a grand twist on the old story!
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Post by susan on Jul 4, 2018 8:15:31 GMT -6
never did like that story, but it is a great twist on it rick
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 5, 2018 7:41:22 GMT -6
ROFL Rick, a grand twist on the old story! LOL ... I had fun writing this one, Brian  Thank you! |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 5, 2018 7:42:11 GMT -6
never did like that story, but it is a great twist on it rick I am really happy you like my version of a story you otherwise did not like, Susan; thank you |
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Post by susan on Jul 5, 2018 9:06:55 GMT -6
you're welcome
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Post by AquarianM on Jul 5, 2018 10:01:24 GMT -6
Now THAT is clever plot twist. Wat to go, Rick!
Dan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 6, 2018 0:43:38 GMT -6
That is absolutely adorable Rick. Nice change for that happy ending I love.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 6, 2018 5:57:27 GMT -6
Now THAT is clever plot twist. Wat to go, Rick! Dan Thank you very much, Dan! |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 6, 2018 5:58:07 GMT -6
That is absolutely adorable Rick. Nice change for that happy ending I love. Thank you, Foxy; I also like happy endings |
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