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Post by simpledip on Jul 4, 2018 5:11:14 GMT -6
A brown leaf floats down lazily the hoopoe on the ground
digs for worms dusk deepens
the fading evening light - Dip
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 4, 2018 5:45:49 GMT -6
This is wonderful imagery in a concise package, I like it very much.
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Post by Brian on Jul 4, 2018 7:26:59 GMT -6
I've had a few quiet country nights like this at the family farm. It brings back happy memories for me.
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Post by AquarianM on Jul 4, 2018 9:44:35 GMT -6
Beautiful. There is something similar where I am from in the Great Lakes area, in far Southern Wisconsin. Though we live in California now, your lovely and serene moment in time reminds me of it greatly. I'll write it soon, and thank you.
Dan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 4, 2018 10:51:10 GMT -6
Very beautiful and serene, Dip. It is soothing and restful. I love the dusk and dawn hours.
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Post by susan on Jul 4, 2018 14:19:14 GMT -6
short and sweet i like
susan
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Post by Deleted on Nov 5, 2018 3:48:25 GMT -6
Love it
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 3, 2018 13:02:24 GMT -6
Dip, you are a nature poet par excellence. This takes me back to Mississippi in another time and place. I thank you for taking me there.
John
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