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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 1, 2018 12:25:00 GMT -6
Dream 7-1-18
Pushing grocery cart in a produce market Past homegrown Maine kale Outside of Presque Isle Where blueberry orchards wait for summer To be harvested by sturdy girls pining for love
Aisles of green leafy vegetables in bunches on racks A freckled young woman faces me in a narrow passage between Edenic edibles. I tell her that I was there first And therefore have the right of passage She says, “What if I sue you for bumping me and hurting my back?” So I make way for her.
Wanting to turn our lemon encounter Into a butternut squash surprise I follow her to the register With “Hey what if our meeting was meant to be because we knew each other from the same Scottish clan in a past life?” “For originality, you get to gaze into my eyes until one of us flinches.”
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Post by AquarianM on Jul 1, 2018 21:09:42 GMT -6
Such a cool turn-around, John. You still have "it."
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 2, 2018 1:17:40 GMT -6
Dan thank you my friend! Good to know I haven't lost my touch. Yes, the ending came to me unexpected after much brainstorming. John
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Post by susan on Jul 2, 2018 7:36:31 GMT -6
well written.....about every day things, that we all have to do
susan
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 2, 2018 9:18:41 GMT -6
Thanks so much my friend. Not sure if the dialogue is every day. But certainly shopping for groceries is. Thank you for your appreciation of my writing. John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 2, 2018 12:39:30 GMT -6
Very creative, John, and totally delightful reading. A very likely scenario these days for a couple to meet, and as Dan said, "nice turn-around." Love this one.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 2, 2018 16:01:10 GMT -6
Thanks so much, Foxy. This was one of a sequence of dreams I had a few nights ago. That night my mind was on full throttle. LOL Glad, you enjoyed the turn around my friend. John
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Post by susan on Jul 2, 2018 16:06:58 GMT -6
you're welcome john....
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 3, 2018 6:28:00 GMT -6
Cool! I love how your enchanting poem ended, John
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 3, 2018 12:56:43 GMT -6
Much thanks, Rick. This one was inspired by a dream I had. There was much more to the dream but this was the most coherent part. Glad you enjoyed my friend. John
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Post by Brian on Jul 3, 2018 22:11:17 GMT -6
A very creative pick up line in the grocery store, dream or not. Made me smile with the outcome.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 4, 2018 22:52:34 GMT -6
Much gratitude Phoenix. Indeed if only I could come up with such lines in real life and they would work on top of that. LOL THe medium of poetry makes all things possible. John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 4, 2018 23:31:46 GMT -6
As do dreams, John. You might like our dream thread. As of now, Cat is our super dreamer. Check in here sometime: Click here
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 5, 2018 12:14:40 GMT -6
Thanks for sharing that thread, Foxy my friend. Indeed I have quite a few dream poems. However, some of them are a bit adulty. lol
John
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