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Post by lostineternity99 on May 28, 2018 5:54:15 GMT -6
 You float through dream vistas each night
Your touch rings in lucidity...
With you close by, the skies are bright.
Your voice, a nocturnal delight
It enchants my soul to flow free...
You float through dream vistas each night.
I see wonders through your eye sight
Our vision, entwined as can be...
With you close by, the skies are bright.
Timeless are our beautiful flights
They are so magical to me...
You float through dream vistas each night.
Togetherness like ours must be right
I know you ever were my key...
With you close by, the skies are bright.
We are rising to greater heights
Our spirits desire to fly free;
You float through dream vistas each night...
With you close by, the skies are bright. |
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Post by goldenmyst on May 28, 2018 11:20:45 GMT -6
Wonderful rhythm and the vision of floating with the one you love is like a dream of romance so beautiful it never fades or ends. The image of floating through the sky is one I've returned to in my own night dreams. You put into words what was the magic of my youth.  John |
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 28, 2018 15:14:40 GMT -6
It is really nice knowing my poem reminded you of floating in dreams when you were a child; I always appreciate knowing when the rhythm of my words are complimented ... thank you very much |
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 30, 2018 7:43:04 GMT -6
What a magical flight of love for this couple who have escaped the pull of earth into their own dream world. Beautifully written. Love it, Rick.
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Post by susan on May 30, 2018 7:44:34 GMT -6
oh this is beautiful
susan
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Post by oldarmybear on May 30, 2018 16:58:48 GMT -6
Please give me some of that fairy dust so I can fly like Peter Pan. Love the poem, Mate.
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 31, 2018 5:30:45 GMT -6
What a magical flight of love for this couple who have escaped the pull of earth into their own dream world. Beautifully written. Love it, Rick. Thank you so very much, Foxy |
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 31, 2018 5:31:26 GMT -6
oh this is beautiful susan I am happy you like my villanelle, Susan; thank you |
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 31, 2018 5:33:00 GMT -6
Please give me some of that fairy dust so I can fly like Peter Pan. Love the poem, Mate. Thank you, Don; some fairy dust is on its way  |
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Post by goldenmyst on Jun 5, 2018 15:43:40 GMT -6
Ahhh, my friend, a lover with whom you rendezvous in dreams. Such a lucid dream poem this is. It reads like a heavenly vista where love is made real. Reminiscent of ancient lore. Your Polaris leads you and me the reader, out of the darkness of this world and into a light so bright all is clear and love.
John
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jun 6, 2018 7:02:42 GMT -6
I appreciate your magical compliments, John; lucid dreams of love are the best! Thank you, my friend |
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 1, 2018 23:19:13 GMT -6
A lover who visits you in your dreams is an enchanting vision. I love the feeling of a lightness of being here which leaves me floating in the beauty of your vision.
John
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 3, 2018 6:31:41 GMT -6
Thank you for such wonderfully poetic praise, John!
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Post by Brian on Jul 6, 2018 11:56:22 GMT -6
A beautiful Kyrielle Rick. The wings of love glitter like the stars above on this flight through the heart.
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Post by simpledip on Jul 7, 2018 4:25:30 GMT -6
Bows deeply.
The Wings of Love
what magical moments to be able to fly.
- Dip
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 7, 2018 6:06:19 GMT -6
A beautiful Kyrielle Rick. The wings of love glitter like the stars above on this flight through the heart. Thank you for such poetic praise, Brian |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 7, 2018 6:07:38 GMT -6
Bows deeply. The Wings of Love what magical moments to be able to fly. - Dip Thank you so much and yes ... flying in lucid dreams is truly magical. |
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Post by AquarianM on Jul 9, 2018 23:40:53 GMT -6
I love this, Rick. I've had dreams of flying - almost swimming - through the sky on occasion over the years. They are some of my most favorite dreams. The idea of flying through the sky with your love in dreams appeals as few other dreams could.
Dan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 10, 2018 6:10:10 GMT -6
Thank you, Dan; I agree this romantic flying dream would be the best! My favorite lucid dreams have always involved flying ... to mountain tops, across oceans and even to the moon.  |
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