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Post by lostineternity99 on May 24, 2018 6:44:06 GMT -6
 I am Medusa
Please look at my face;
Do not be alarmed...
I shall not give chase.
I really am nice
And so lonely too;
Please look at my face...
You may like the view.
You must not leave me
I hate this dank place;
Do me this favor...
Please look at my face.
Please look at my face
The tales are not true;
No turning to stone...
I swear this to you.
You still seem nervous
Please look at my face;
It will be okay...
Have I made my case?
You turn towards me
Though your eyes are down;
Please look at my face...
Or else I shall frown!
Yes that is better
I made you a space;
My new stone treasure...
You looked at my face! |
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Medusa
May 24, 2018 8:25:13 GMT -6
Post by oldarmybear on May 24, 2018 8:25:13 GMT -6
Love it. the rhyme scheme works perfectly...
Don
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Medusa
May 25, 2018 6:11:53 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on May 25, 2018 6:11:53 GMT -6
I am really happy you like my rhyming, I love to do so in many poetic styles; thank you!
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Medusa
May 25, 2018 18:27:02 GMT -6
Post by Catlady2710 on May 25, 2018 18:27:02 GMT -6
That liar! LOL...love it Rick!
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Medusa
May 26, 2018 7:50:25 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on May 26, 2018 7:50:25 GMT -6
A liar she is! LOL Thank you, Cat!  |
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Medusa
May 26, 2018 23:24:56 GMT -6
Post by QueenFoxy on May 26, 2018 23:24:56 GMT -6
Ooooh Nooooo!! You just can't trust anyone. Great rhythm and style, Rick. Love it.
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Medusa
May 27, 2018 7:02:43 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on May 27, 2018 7:02:43 GMT -6
Especially a Gorgon! LOL Thank you and thank you, Foxy |
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Medusa
May 28, 2018 11:28:57 GMT -6
Post by goldenmyst on May 28, 2018 11:28:57 GMT -6
You made me laugh again this afternoon. She would make a good door to door salesperson. Her seduction of this hapless man was played out to perfection. Your poetry is a delight! John |
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Medusa
May 28, 2018 15:11:15 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on May 28, 2018 15:11:15 GMT -6
Laughs are such terrific compliments! LOL She is a tricky one for sure; thank you so much |
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Medusa
Jul 1, 2018 23:22:11 GMT -6
Post by goldenmyst on Jul 1, 2018 23:22:11 GMT -6
Reminds me of the saying, Come into my parlor said the spider to the fly. It is the nicest little parlor that you will every spy." Your playful rewriting of this myth is the perfect way to close my night. Truly a delight.
John
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Medusa
Jul 3, 2018 6:30:26 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 3, 2018 6:30:26 GMT -6
I love your comparison to that poetic saying, John and am happy you enjoyed my Medusa so much ... thank you |
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Post by AquarianM on Jul 3, 2018 23:35:22 GMT -6
Ah, she's tricksy! Not even with a mirror!
Dan
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Medusa
Jul 4, 2018 4:52:30 GMT -6
Post by simpledip on Jul 4, 2018 4:52:30 GMT -6
I can not rhyme and I see the beauty of Rhyming here.
As far as the beauty of Medusa - I am not very certain about it.
Namaste
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 4, 2018 5:43:19 GMT -6
Ah, she's tricksy! Not even with a mirror! Dan LOL! She is 'lucky' sometimes; thank you for reading |
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Medusa
Jul 4, 2018 5:44:33 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 4, 2018 5:44:33 GMT -6
I can not rhyme and I see the beauty of Rhyming here. As far as the beauty of Medusa - I am not very certain about it. Namaste You are right, there is nothing beautiful about Medusa and ... thank you very much for such high rhyming praise, Dip. |
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Medusa
Jul 4, 2018 7:24:54 GMT -6
Post by Brian on Jul 4, 2018 7:24:54 GMT -6
Deceptive seduction at its finest.
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Medusa
Jul 4, 2018 7:35:11 GMT -6
Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 4, 2018 7:35:11 GMT -6
Thank you, Brian |
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