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Post by oldarmybear on May 23, 2018 16:20:08 GMT -6
his banter was quite flirtatious his demeanor was quite ostentatious he seemed such a lout I gave him a shout and sent him to wide open spaces
Copyright ©2018 Don Tyson
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 23, 2018 16:47:41 GMT -6
Hmmm....me thinks he had it coming.
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 24, 2018 6:42:10 GMT -6
Three cheers for victory over this lout; nice one.
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Post by oldarmybear on May 24, 2018 8:26:06 GMT -6
Thank you my poetic Pals.
Don
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Post by goldenmyst on May 28, 2018 11:38:42 GMT -6
My second read of this was even better than the great first one. Probably I had more peace of mind today. But what a playfully delightful poem you penned here. Enjoyed your limerick thoroughly.
John
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Post by Brian on Jul 3, 2018 0:20:35 GMT -6
LOL Don, justice indeed served!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 11, 2019 1:11:44 GMT -6
Woo Hoo!!
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 11, 2019 10:08:23 GMT -6
LOL Don - thanks for my laugh for the day
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Post by AquarianM on Apr 12, 2019 1:10:40 GMT -6
Don, very direct & strong. Cool write.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 12, 2019 19:22:26 GMT -6
Don, I enjoyed this limerick to the max. A fun write with a great punchline.
John
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