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Post by lostineternity99 on May 21, 2018 6:22:19 GMT -6
 Anne wants to reap like her boyfriend
More time with him, she wants to spend;
She has a brand new reaping scythe...
To a dull life, she says goodbye.
Perhaps they will start a new trend
Anne wants to reap like her boyfriend;
Reaper couples just may catch on...
A new career move, they may spawn.
Her attire looks more cute than grim
Perhaps this is a passing whim;
Anne wants to reap like her boyfriend...
Cool Reaper greetings she has penned.
She hesitates on their first night
The thought of reaping brings some fright;
Their freaky romance just may end...
Anne wants to reap like her boyfriend. |
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Post by goldenmyst on May 21, 2018 15:05:49 GMT -6
I love this! You blend a Halloweenish reaping image into a brilliantly funny and romantic gem. This is why I've always loved your poetry. Poems like this are what this old world needs.
John
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Post by oldarmybear on May 21, 2018 18:19:18 GMT -6
Cool Stuff here.
Don
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 22, 2018 6:13:17 GMT -6
I love this! You blend a Halloweenish reaping image into a brilliantly funny and romantic gem. This is why I've always loved your poetry. Poems like this are what this old world needs. John Thank you very much for such high praise, John! I am happy you love fun fantasy poems as they are my favorite to write. 
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 22, 2018 6:18:28 GMT -6
Cool Stuff here. Don Thank you so much, Don. |
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 22, 2018 9:31:43 GMT -6
This is fun, romantic and pure fantasy. I love it, Rick. Love the way you can take something grim and turn into something sweetly desirable.
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 23, 2018 5:57:20 GMT -6
Thank you, Foxy! Romantic fantasy that is fun too is a favorite of my muse  |
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 23, 2018 6:04:36 GMT -6
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 24, 2018 6:40:25 GMT -6
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Post by goldenmyst on May 28, 2018 11:43:54 GMT -6
My revisit of this poem was all the more fantastic than the first. My mind was a bit muddled on the first go round. Your ending made me laugh. A book of your poetry would make the days happier were I to be stranded on a desert island. There is magic in your verse my friend. John |
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 28, 2018 15:08:33 GMT -6
It is fantastic knowing you read my poem twice and my ending made you laugh; also how much you would value a book of my poetry if stranded on an island ... thank you very much |
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Post by Brian on Jun 29, 2018 19:06:38 GMT -6
Love seeing this one again Rick.
You know how I love Quaterns. This one calls for more than one read.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jun 30, 2018 6:14:11 GMT -6
I am very happy you enjoyed my Quatern so much you came back for another read, Brian and yes ... I do know you love this form Thank you! |
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jun 30, 2018 14:26:37 GMT -6
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 1, 2018 23:08:50 GMT -6
My second reading of this illuminated it wonderfully. So Anne believes a couple that reaps together stays together. This is one of my favorites of yours. It is so delightfully romantic. John |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 3, 2018 6:40:39 GMT -6
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 3, 2018 6:42:44 GMT -6
My second reading of this illuminated it wonderfully. So Anne believes a couple that reaps together stays together. This is one of my favorites of yours. It is so delightfully romantic. John I am very happy you came back to read my poem again and it is one of your favorites, John! Thank you for the most appreciated compliments |
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