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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 29, 2022 17:36:02 GMT -6
her heart a loch with the blues memories echo
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Post by Deleted on Jul 30, 2022 0:02:50 GMT -6
I like how you played this out with the words John. It reads "blue", memories in blue as if "blue emotionally", the heart a lake, "blue" with the water in essence and "blue" with the loneliness/emotion perhaps in the echoing memories of past love lapping in waves like the water. How I took it all in anyway Awesome piece
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 30, 2022 0:20:01 GMT -6
Michael that is one of the best insights into any poem I've posted. Your metaphorical view sees deep into the layered meaning here. Love the unique way you have of understanding my poetry. You really felt the subtexts of this poem superbly.
John
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Post by Deleted on Jul 31, 2022 4:37:25 GMT -6
it's great work John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 31, 2022 11:46:25 GMT -6
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 31, 2022 13:34:35 GMT -6
Thanks, Foxy. Much appreciated.
Xo John
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