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Post by John on Jul 25, 2022 15:20:19 GMT -6
sacred moments slip like beads through trembling fingers wolves howl the wind closer
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 26, 2022 10:29:11 GMT -6
Beautiful
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 26, 2022 14:56:34 GMT -6
Grand tag my friend. Indeed my life changed completely when the internet came out. I found friends like I never had before. When my local friends vanished the net came to the rescue.
Xo John
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2022 1:07:53 GMT -6
it's a lovely write John...the loneliness is felt and experienced, the trembling of the fingers trying to grasp the moment(s) lost and the fleeting sense of it all comes through bringing the experience of loneliness through in a physical sense while the lonely howl of the wolves makes the impact of it all ten-fold. Touching write, deep to the soul of the reader.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 27, 2022 13:29:30 GMT -6
I love how you found the connection between the rosary fingers and the howls my friend. Truly a well-thought-out and deeply felt reflection on my words. Much appreciated.
John
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2022 22:52:31 GMT -6
it's a most excellent piece John, really hit me
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 27, 2022 23:33:20 GMT -6
Thanks so much, Michael. Giving the reader something to feel is my greatest goal. And coming from a writer of your caliber your comment means the world to me.
John
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Post by Deleted on Jul 28, 2022 1:09:02 GMT -6
The caliber is mutual broheem
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