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The Fog
Jun 12, 2022 2:15:18 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 12, 2022 2:15:18 GMT -6
The Fog
Tonight is the night of the fog.
It always comes this time each year.
The people lock themselves inside
and pray to God that HE will hear.
The people have tried to get away.
It seems to follow, they are its prey
as one by one they disappear.
Every year a year of fear.
And now the fog is crawling in.
From it screams are heard, trapped souls within.
Mothers hold their children tight.
Fathers watch it close in sight.
How far away sounds the church bell!
Does prayer escape? 'Tis hard to tell.
It comes making a crunching sound.
Whom this year to not be found?
Swallowing houses lying ahead
as children hide under their bed.
One house soon gone and then another.
Soon Sarah is screaming for her brother.
--msl2022
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jun 12, 2022 8:47:52 GMT -6
Very terrifying engrossing! Great write Michael
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Jun 12, 2022 21:17:47 GMT -6
Post by QueenFoxy on Jun 12, 2022 21:17:47 GMT -6
Ooooh!! Scareeee, Michael. Every word draws you deeper into the fog. Very, very well written.
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Jun 17, 2022 21:41:15 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Jun 17, 2022 21:41:15 GMT -6
ty both glad you enjoyed
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Jun 18, 2022 20:45:14 GMT -6
Post by goldenmyst on Jun 18, 2022 20:45:14 GMT -6
Michael this is a hauntingly powerful tale of dark magic. You have an inimitable talent with the ghostly aspects of this mysterious universe we live in.
John
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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2022 1:55:25 GMT -6
Ty John I like exploring the dark areas a little lol...love Poe, hardly on his level however but I admire his work
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 1, 2022 11:22:42 GMT -6
I think you are very talented Michael and Poe would either be proud of you, or jealous of you.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 8, 2022 0:58:44 GMT -6
Ty Cat...you give me too much credit but ty, you're sweet
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 8, 2022 1:07:57 GMT -6
I agree Cat. Poe couldn't hold a candle to our Michael.
John
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