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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 20, 2022 6:55:42 GMT -6
holocene lovers
between glacial epochs, amorous creosote airs
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Post by oldarmybear on Jan 20, 2022 11:33:14 GMT -6
Okay, if you say so... You drove me to the dictionary again, John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jan 20, 2022 12:04:55 GMT -6
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 20, 2022 13:11:46 GMT -6
Thanks for bearing with my verbiage Don. And for following up your read with a dictionary consultation.
John
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 20, 2022 13:12:50 GMT -6
Thanks for the groovy tag, Foxy. And for reading my poetic vision.
XoXoXo John
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Post by oldarmybear on Jan 20, 2022 13:53:01 GMT -6
Thanks for bearing with my verbiage Don. And for following up your read with a dictionary consultation. John I enjoy reading you, John. Sometimes your verbiage is unfamiliar to me. And I want to fully understand what I am reading.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 20, 2022 14:48:17 GMT -6
This one was about two lovers having a romantic encounter in the Holocene era which is the one we are in between the ice ages. Thanks again for reading.
John
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 20, 2022 18:20:44 GMT -6
Howdy Don and everyone,
Don, how do you, are anyone here, like this revision of the poem?
holocene lovers
between ice ages, amorous creosote airs
Ice Age may be more recognizable than Glacial Epoch.
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Post by oldarmybear on Jan 21, 2022 18:20:56 GMT -6
go with the original and let the reader learn something new if he will.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jan 21, 2022 18:56:33 GMT -6
Thanks for the advice, Don. I agree.
John
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Post by Deleted on Jan 31, 2022 23:43:53 GMT -6
Enjoyed John, always do
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Post by goldenmyst on Feb 1, 2022 0:58:03 GMT -6
Much gratitude Michael. Very glad you enjoyed it.
John
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