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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2019 1:31:18 GMT -6
IN PASSING
Walking on the left side while you walk along the right. For a time we see each other then we are out of sight.
Our road without a median to meet within the middle. Answers, they evade me as I cannot solve the riddle.
I cannot cross my yellow line though I see you are allowed. Your line is dashed, allowed to pass in so doing you are proud.
I turn and watch you walk away, warmth and sunshine become friend then turn back to the blowing winds to wait for you again.
We walk our circle, cycle. We fall in our sights once more where you pass me in the middle just as you have times before
until the day I walk the right leaving you to bear the cold walking left where here you placed me our cycle maintains its hold.
--msl2019
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Post by lostineternity99 on Apr 17, 2019 4:03:27 GMT -6
A fascinating cycle this is; nice writing Mike.
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 17, 2019 20:45:08 GMT -6
Mike, my how tables turn. You really made me think deeply with this one. When lovers part often it is harder on one than the other. But as time passes those roles can change. Thanks for sharing Mike.
John
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2019 1:36:37 GMT -6
Ty for reading
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Post by poetinpink on Apr 20, 2019 19:29:22 GMT -6
~Mic~ Passing through for a read and as always it is a good one You got my thunker thinking on this one Huggerz Alana
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Post by Deleted on Apr 21, 2019 1:05:50 GMT -6
thanks all... a lotta metaphor here
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Post by AquarianM on Apr 21, 2019 2:38:34 GMT -6
Interesting how people come and go from our lives, each leaving their impression, large or small.
Dan
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Post by Deleted on Apr 23, 2019 0:03:21 GMT -6
indeed. ty all
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 23, 2019 7:55:07 GMT -6
A unique view on life
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Post by susan on Apr 23, 2019 13:05:07 GMT -6
very cool
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Post by QueenFoxy on Apr 23, 2019 19:18:02 GMT -6
Sad story, Michael, when your love is so near and yet so far away. So sad that line keeps it that way. So sad there has to be a line at all.
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Post by simpledip on Apr 24, 2019 20:02:31 GMT -6
Love like rain is an alchemy turns heart to gold
makes people dream wondrous dreams never goes anywhere
Love creates safe place to be to dream deeply.
Bows deeply to Michael.
- Dip
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Post by Deleted on Apr 25, 2019 0:17:35 GMT -6
ty all...for some reason i cannot "like" all the comments, site won't let me
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