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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 3, 2018 6:06:00 GMT -6
Kayden protects all those in need She is a very special breed; Long flowing hair strikes fear in foes... She wears well, her warrior clothes.
Many innocents, she has freed Kayden protects all those in need; Her heart is bold and oh so pure... For injustice, she is the cure.
She wields a most magical blade Its metals are the highest grade; Kayden protects all those in need... She captures plotters of misdeeds!
Village children see her and cheer They feel secure when she is near; She is a heroine, indeed... Kayden protects all those in need.
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Post by goldenmyst on Nov 3, 2018 9:20:50 GMT -6
I love female heroines in literature and your poem is a great example of the genre. Your rhythm and meter are superb here. And your storytelling is outstanding. Love your vision of Kayden.
John
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 3, 2018 21:30:30 GMT -6
Wish the world had more like Kayden.
Dan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 4, 2018 6:40:03 GMT -6
I love female heroines in literature and your poem is a great example of the genre. Your rhythm and meter are superb here. And your storytelling is outstanding. Love your vision of Kayden. John Thank you, John! I love creating heroines and female characters in general; I appreciate your very high praise. Kayden means Pure Warrior in Elvish
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 4, 2018 6:40:35 GMT -6
Wish the world had more like Kayden. Dan As do I, Dan; thank you for reading.
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Post by susan on Nov 4, 2018 8:32:21 GMT -6
i do like this poem about a strong woman
well done
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Post by Deleted on Nov 5, 2018 3:14:44 GMT -6
Cool read brotein shake! Love it. Maybe Kayden should run for Prez......I'm still nominating John though. Kayden can do security! See....this is all working out.....
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 5, 2018 6:18:26 GMT -6
i do like this poem about a strong woman well done I do like creating strong women characters, Susan; thank you
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 5, 2018 6:20:17 GMT -6
Cool read brotein shake! Love it. Maybe Kayden should run for Prez......I'm still nominating John though. Kayden can do security! See....this is all working out..... Ha ha, Kayden is better suited for security than being president! Thank you, Mike ... it is working out
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Post by susan on Nov 5, 2018 8:16:15 GMT -6
then i hopefully will read more you're welcome susan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 5, 2018 13:37:18 GMT -6
I love this Rick. Kayden is a warrior after my own heart. I would join her security detail. Attachment Deleted
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 6, 2018 7:05:04 GMT -6
then i hopefully will read more you're welcome susan That would be really nice; my poetry room here has them all safely stored ... my main heroine is Aisling and she has had 20 plus triumphs over evil so far
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 6, 2018 7:06:02 GMT -6
I love this Rick. Kayden is a warrior after my own heart. I would join her security detail.
Kayden would love for you to join here security detail, Foxy! Thank you very much
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Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 6, 2018 11:00:57 GMT -6
Magic lives here in this sanctuary. I can feel it.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 6, 2018 17:07:49 GMT -6
Magic sure does live here and fuels my poetry
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Post by QueenFoxy on Nov 7, 2018 23:22:58 GMT -6
Must be mighty good fuel.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 8, 2018 6:20:58 GMT -6
Yes it sure is
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