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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 26, 2018 19:57:50 GMT -6
She Smiles for Me
My shoulders bear the burden of the tent but she bears the heaviest bundle which is, in fact, no hardship for her of her mirror of the sun in ribbon laced smile which bounces its beams from my looking glass eyes to melt us into a funny paper mood when two comic strip readers laugh in harmony over French toast fresh from the griddle on our Sunday morning campsite date
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 26, 2018 20:30:37 GMT -6
Beautiful, sweet, and romantic. I've never seen you write with such brevity, John, but you are very good at it.
Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 26, 2018 21:57:26 GMT -6
Thank you so much, Dan. Love knowing this was beautifully and sweetly romantic. I used to write with brevity a lot. I love expressing myself in the short form.
John
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2018 1:34:36 GMT -6
And you do it so well
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 27, 2018 11:31:59 GMT -6
Thank you so much, Michael. I appreciate your encouragement.
John
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