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Post by augustsky on Oct 20, 2018 2:56:40 GMT -6
My Autumn Ghost~
Indian Summer sun
honey-glows your memory,
you surround like the weathered
open back porch calling my thoughts
to gather and reflect.
I'm settled by the fire-pit warmth
in the cushioned glider
moving and smoothing concerns
to and fro.
Nearby.. circled evergreens
hold a seance for the birch tree
that died by the shed,
as an evening chill scatter blows
and lifts embers to cold stars.
Your hinted presence provides
a trusted familiarity
that's sorely needed
under this cloud bobbing
wary moon.
©Augustsky
10-19-18
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Post by lostineternity99 on Oct 20, 2018 6:33:59 GMT -6
Your imagery is as fabulous as ever, Sky: "Nearby circled evergreens hold a seance for the birch tree that died by the shed, as an evening chill scatters and lifts embers to cold stars." Potent is its emotional impact ... I also love "under a cloud bobbing wary moon". It is soo nice reading you again (((hugs))) Rick  |
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Post by augustsky on Oct 20, 2018 23:04:50 GMT -6
Rick, So pleased to see you replied to my 1st Poem here, :-)
this one just came to me very quickly, thanks for the read &
dear response.
Sky~
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Post by AquarianM on Oct 21, 2018 0:11:36 GMT -6
Absolutely gorgeous, Sky. Autumn is much more subtle here in Southern California, but it does still exist. One of my favorite seasons in the Midwest. Your description is wonderful, though lonely and haunting too.
Dan
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2018 4:13:08 GMT -6
I have always found the magic of your imagery so incredible! You literally paint inside my head! There's at least a few other voices in my head too to keep you company btw. Fantastic as always!
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Post by QueenFoxy on Oct 21, 2018 11:53:01 GMT -6
Very beautiful, Sky, with so much emotion. Love it.  |
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Post by augustsky on Oct 21, 2018 18:50:03 GMT -6
Thank you for your read & comments Dan,
I Love this time of year..but it can also bring on a little melancholy.
Appreciate you Poet..
Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 21, 2018 18:55:09 GMT -6
Michael, That is one of the Nicest compliments I've ever received.." you literally paint inside my head!"
Thank you...means a lot. :0)
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Post by augustsky on Oct 21, 2018 19:04:46 GMT -6
Foxy, Thank you for the generous reply, & what a lovely creation too.  |
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Post by susan on Oct 21, 2018 19:45:44 GMT -6
this is a wonderfully painted image....well done
susan
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Post by augustsky on Oct 22, 2018 18:03:13 GMT -6
Thank you much Susan ;-)
Sky~
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Post by goldenmyst on Oct 28, 2018 19:20:21 GMT -6
You strummed my emotional melody into a remembrance of years past with your ambient words which set the mood for love. Gorgeous my friend.
XoXo
John
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Post by susan on Oct 28, 2018 20:01:37 GMT -6
you are welcome
susan
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Post by augustsky on Oct 30, 2018 23:51:43 GMT -6
Thank you Poet John
Sky~
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