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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 25, 2024 0:56:38 GMT -6
Sentence
My days used to be labored.
I would find myself feeling heavy,
smothered.
Nothing.
There was nothing that could take away the weight.
Nothing that is until you.
What did you do to me?
I ask not accusatory but out of gratitude and relief.
Now my days are not so heavy
and even when they feel in such a way
I think of you and the weight washes away.
A harbinger, a healer with a message
that I thought would never be delivered.
I was dead inside but now I find myself
participating in a life that I thought had gone extinct
so many years ago.
Now when I see my sight is clear.
I am not seeing and living life
looking through that awful screen.
How long have I been away?
I have catching up to do.
I had a dream.
A conversation with Atlas
and he said to give him back the world.
My sentence was now done.
--msl2024
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Post by goldenmyst on Jun 25, 2024 4:59:09 GMT -6
Michael the exquisite narrative here is a wonder to behold. Nothing overblown an economy of words that lends itself perfectly to the magic of your storytelling. Love like this that takes the burden of the world from a person's shoulders doesn't come every day and sometimes not in a lifetime. You wrote this with a sharp pen that etched out the imagery and narrative to perfection.
John
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jun 26, 2024 10:48:44 GMT -6
Love it Michael Someone recovering from severe depression and loving life again! You have do perfectly penned this!
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Jun 26, 2024 23:28:19 GMT -6
ty both appreciate it
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