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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 11, 2023 22:36:06 GMT -6
Before we face the pain
Repainting darkness into a
pleasing oasis, doesn’t conceal it’s truth.
Positive attitudes created for
more appealing appearances
only mask what’s hidden underneath.
When is it time to verify the information,
start acting accordingly to it’s existence?
Sooner or later the illusion will chip away,
proceeding now may give us valuable time.
Let’s live a little before we have to face
what's actually under the paint.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 11, 2023 23:52:38 GMT -6
I really like this one Sugar  This has me thinking of "fake" people, two-faced, etc. My take anyway. Awesome stuff |
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 12, 2023 2:15:27 GMT -6
Thank you Michael.
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Post by goldenmyst on Apr 12, 2023 12:10:29 GMT -6
Loved this. The ending really made for great irony. Wanting to enjoy life before the pain removes the masks in spite of the hidden truth. Brilliant way to tie the poem together with hope if only for a while.
John
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Post by Catlady2710 on Apr 12, 2023 12:45:17 GMT -6
Big caring hugs Sugar. Your poem expresses so much hidden passion.
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 12, 2023 14:42:55 GMT -6
Thank you John, I needed to write this yesterday. ❤️ your reply
Thank you Cat, when you try to find the words you work through to a clearer view point. Life is passion when we lose passion life is empty.
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This has me thinking of "fake" people, two-faced, etc. My take anyway. Awesome stuff 
