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Post by Sugarmuser on Mar 30, 2023 16:20:29 GMT -6
Controlling curiosities
pull out the nuts and bolts
securing a relationship.
Temptation pressures a restless life
to walk unsecured, inviting disturbance
to unbalance steps.
Left standing motionless before a
clouded decision, one that determines
the clarity of tomorrow
P.s we all know tomorrow isn't guarenteed
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Post by Catlady2710 on Mar 30, 2023 18:22:09 GMT -6
Strong emotions beautifully written Sugar.
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Post by Sugarmuser on Mar 30, 2023 19:36:55 GMT -6
thank you Cat
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Post by goldenmyst on Mar 30, 2023 19:51:29 GMT -6
A wonderful poem my friend. Speaks so much to your love as a mother and the meaning of caring. Love the rewrite here too. Works so perfectly.
John
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Post by Sugarmuser on Mar 31, 2023 1:17:55 GMT -6
Thank you John, always value your comments
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 1, 2023 23:06:16 GMT -6
Beautiful writing as I so remember of your talents. It is really good to read you again and I hope you are doing well  |
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 2, 2023 3:08:28 GMT -6
Thanks Mike, I’m doing well, how are you? It’s been a while
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 4, 2023 1:06:23 GMT -6
Have had a rough time as of late but I am doing much better now thank you for asking. |
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Post by Sugarmuser on Apr 4, 2023 2:39:42 GMT -6
Mike so Sorry to hear you were not doing good, but glad to hear you’re doing better.
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Post by Castle Court Jester on Apr 4, 2023 23:32:24 GMT -6
I'm doing much better now Ty |
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