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Post by Deleted on Aug 4, 2022 2:38:44 GMT -6
Balance
Walking into the wind with least resistance.
Walking, covering an absurd amount of distance.
Dressed in black, sunglasses covering the eyes.
Walking into the wind beneath electromagnetic skies.
Walking into the wind, stepping gently to the air.
Walking, stepping in a city scattered everywhere.
Surrounded by an aura never experienced before.
Stepping, rising through the air, heavy nevermore.
Thick clouds becoming purple, lightning cutting all around,
flashing violently although followed not by any sound.
Walking, floating, rising still, a scale sits up high.
Balance through the storms.
Will you balance?
Will you lie?
--msl2022
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Aug 4, 2022 13:01:46 GMT -6
Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 4, 2022 13:01:46 GMT -6
I love walking into the wind and feeling the wind whip my hair around, but I think you are talking about something completely different here. Does this depict someone's death or hardship? Interesting poem
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Aug 4, 2022 23:33:34 GMT -6
Post by goldenmyst on Aug 4, 2022 23:33:34 GMT -6
This felt like sheet lightning on a summer's day after an apocalypse. The energy here was electromagnetic and took me walking on feathered shoes. A vision that is a sign of things to come. Real as any poem I've read. And powerful as the earth's magnetic poles shifting like the moods of a man seeking balance.
John
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Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2022 2:35:42 GMT -6
It has a lot of metaphor and symbolism in it, I know..not easy to interpret and as always, how one interprets art in any form is "right" for them of course. This, in my way is meant as a reflection on not just society itself but where each individual sees themselves in society and with how society and our own individuality is going forward with our behavior and morality, spirituality, etc. in the "big picture." and ultimately in relation to any "higher power" however one chooses to believe. If that helps or makes any sense.
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Aug 5, 2022 20:31:22 GMT -6
Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 5, 2022 20:31:22 GMT -6
It is very deep and makes one think of the mystery within the words.
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Aug 5, 2022 23:54:08 GMT -6
Post by Deleted on Aug 5, 2022 23:54:08 GMT -6
Ty Foxy
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Aug 8, 2022 10:22:41 GMT -6
Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 8, 2022 10:22:41 GMT -6
Thanks Michael. I thought that this poem meant so much more.
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