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Post by susan on Jun 18, 2019 20:09:06 GMT -6
thank you for the inspriation jessie susan why hello miss sunshine chicak the yellow chick said who was wearing her red bandanato match her comb. oh yes males have combs on top of their heads but this one was a girl and liked the ornament. hello back chicka miss sunshine replied., i see that you have brought your little chipped cup with you. yes this is my friend chap, i promised him today he can come with me and chase his blue butterfly among the flowers. then i will continue to shine upon you miss chica, you and your friend chap. so frolick amoung the flowers. thank you miss sunshine, on look there's a poink one, chap and look at the clump of yellow ones they would make a great spot for a wonderful nap later one, wouldn't they so that's just what they did played and frollicked among the flowers as miss sunshine shone down on them, and then went for a nap. susan
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Post by Deleted on Jun 19, 2019 1:59:44 GMT -6
Love this Susan! Again, can SO easily see your work in children's magazines/books. You have a real talent
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jun 19, 2019 5:38:19 GMT -6
I agree, many of your poems would be fantastic as stories in books for children. This one really shines, Susan
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Post by susan on Jun 19, 2019 7:03:33 GMT -6
thank you guys
one of these days they will be, i really do hope
susan
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jun 21, 2019 8:34:40 GMT -6
Oh Susan, this one drips with the kind od charm that childern love. It is what thay want to have read to them over and over and over again until they know it word for word. Great job, m'lady. Well done.
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