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Post by susan on Mar 5, 2019 20:40:56 GMT -6
you are old and wise i am but a young one what wisdom do you have for me as i cross the reiver to come to you
everyday is a journey that you must take my young doe.
no one can do it for you, in the end you must do it alone
we can guide you to make the choices you must make but in the end, you and you alone will do that.
as you journey through day by day and make your way, you will make right choices and wrong, but you must learn the difference between the two
will i ever achieve your wisdome oh deer of the forest.
my young doe, she said no you will not and please do not be cross with me for i have not achieved full wisdom and i never will
we young and old alike are always learning, we are always on that journey
susan
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Post by simpledip on Mar 6, 2019 6:46:01 GMT -6
we young and old alike are always learning, we are always on that journey
susanSusan,
You have told the Truth and I bow to you deeply. This really touched me deeply. Namaste. - Dip
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Post by susan on Mar 6, 2019 7:44:50 GMT -6
thank you dip, much appreciated
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Post by lostineternity99 on Mar 7, 2019 6:17:20 GMT -6
Yes, we are always learning at all ages .... your poem was a joy to read Susan
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Post by susan on Mar 7, 2019 9:30:39 GMT -6
thank you rick
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2019 3:12:32 GMT -6
This is great! Love this, a definitive favorite for me of your works.
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