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Post by susan on Jan 13, 2019 17:46:40 GMT -6
on a poetry board i go to, i found this
i did this back in 2012
and the owner put it forward, said it's still a good read
susan
the tobaggan ride.
let's go for a tobbagan ride, buddy the dog said one fine winter's day
we can do that, bo said, but where can we find one
the kids left theirs in the garage
long forgotten lambie said
let's pull it out buddy said, is it up high.
no it's against the wall
but it's not small whitey said
we can manage boo replied as long as we do it together
the four friends pulled the tobbagan down
and raced to the hills
how do we ride, boo asked
we pull it up the hill
that is the first task
then jump on and ride on down
boo rested his paws on lambie's shoulders
as buddy took up the rear
with whitey at the front, they slid on down
and had so much fun, they did it all over
again
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jan 13, 2019 21:02:09 GMT -6
Aw Susan, That is just precious. That owner was right. It is a delightful read and will be just as delightful next year and the year after. It is timeless.
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Post by susan on Jan 14, 2019 7:32:24 GMT -6
thank you foxy
susan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jan 15, 2019 7:19:45 GMT -6
I love this, Susan! Ideal winter fun
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jan 21, 2019 15:15:24 GMT -6
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Post by Deleted on Mar 1, 2019 2:53:57 GMT -6
Cool read You should consider doing children's stories as well
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Post by susan on Mar 7, 2019 9:38:19 GMT -6
others have told me that as well, and i would like to
but as long as my mom's around, i can't
it might sound aweful, but she does not believe in poetry, and well, that's my delema
susan
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Post by susan on Mar 7, 2019 9:39:16 GMT -6
yes that is the good part about some of my poetry it's timeless susan thank you foxy
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Post by Deleted on Mar 19, 2019 3:18:37 GMT -6
something to keep in mind you'd be great...you ARE great
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Post by poetinpink on Mar 21, 2019 21:23:44 GMT -6
~Susan~ This is so cute! Had me smiling all the way through ~ Enjoyed! Huggerz
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