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Post by Brian on Aug 4, 2018 20:11:28 GMT -6
We've woven this delicate tapestry, Founded upon hearts' roots intertwining, Orchestrated its song masterfully, Embroidering it's gold-silver lining, Each delicate thread a new note in song, Somehow always finding its rightful place, Mirroring how together we belong, Evidenced by love in each other's face, Each new pattern to our creative art, Breathtaking beauty melts us into one, Rises from honesty pure from the heart A crystal clear prism under the sun. Together my love we'll see tomorrow, No unraveled threads will bring us sorrow.
Brian Paul Sullivan © 2010
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 4, 2018 20:52:03 GMT -6
Brian, you write with the lyricism of a romantic from ages past. This swept me away into a world of enchantment. Fine writing my friend.
John
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 5, 2018 1:51:18 GMT -6
Very beautiful, Brian.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Aug 5, 2018 6:52:11 GMT -6
Yes it is a beautiful poem, Brian
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Post by simpledip on Aug 8, 2018 9:44:05 GMT -6
Breathtaking beauty melts us into one, Rises from honesty pure from the heart A crystal clear prism under the sun. Together my love we'll see tomorrow, No unraveled threads will bring us sorrow.
Brian Paul Sullivan © 2010
Lyrical and enchanting Truth. It touched me deeply. Namaste
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Post by Brian on Aug 10, 2018 4:57:27 GMT -6
Brian, you write with the lyricism of a romantic from ages past. This swept me away into a world of enchantment. Fine writing my friend. John Thank you John.
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Post by Brian on Aug 10, 2018 4:57:52 GMT -6
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Post by Brian on Aug 10, 2018 4:58:18 GMT -6
Yes it is a beautiful poem, Brian Thank you Rick.
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Post by Brian on Aug 10, 2018 4:58:42 GMT -6
Breathtaking beauty melts us into one, Rises from honesty pure from the heart A crystal clear prism under the sun. Together my love we'll see tomorrow, No unraveled threads will bring us sorrow. Brian Paul Sullivan © 2010 Lyrical and enchanting Truth. It touched me deeply. Namaste Thank you Namaste
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Post by AquarianM on Aug 10, 2018 19:26:10 GMT -6
Beautiful, Brian. A statement of principle and a way to live.
Dan
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Post by Brian on Aug 11, 2018 6:23:42 GMT -6
Beautiful, Brian. A statement of principle and a way to live. Dan Thank you Dan.
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