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Post by Brian on Jul 27, 2018 1:57:52 GMT -6
Light in the night pierces my dreams, Lady so bright eradicates screams, She mulls as she pulls back the black curtain, No doubting her actions this lady is certain,
She looks then she crooks one little finger, With her I must go there is no time to linger, I feel she's real not merely some wraith, Though I know her not somehow I have faith,
She calls down the halls for her all to follow, She ushers us all down to the hollow, The grace in her face leaves us without fear, Though each one of us senses danger is near,
What is queer as we peer into the mist, How it gathers into one giant fist, Should we yield the field is the question at hand, She motions that here is where we'll make our stand,
We shiver and quiver but we hold our ground, When unto my ear comes insistent sound, I stutter a flutter as I slowly wake, Adventurous dream I now must forsake,
Make my way through the day with hope that I might, Return to my dream to fight the good fight.
Brian Paul Sullivan © 2010
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 27, 2018 6:50:46 GMT -6
Your poem is fantastic, Brian!
*five dream stars*
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 27, 2018 12:48:24 GMT -6
Wonderful surprise ending. Loved it, Brian.
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Post by Brian on Jul 28, 2018 4:18:33 GMT -6
Your poem is fantastic, Brian!
*five dream stars* Thank you very much Rick.
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Post by Brian on Jul 28, 2018 4:19:09 GMT -6
Wonderful surprise ending. Loved it, Brian. Thank you Foxy. Happy you liked that.
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 4, 2018 20:58:38 GMT -6
Nothing more courageous than standing one's ground in the name of love. Your dream spoke of a love so deep that the lovers will take risks in the face of forces trying to tear them apart. Really moving storytelling my friend.
John
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Post by Brian on Aug 9, 2018 0:54:16 GMT -6
Thank you John.
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Post by AquarianM on Aug 17, 2018 23:27:35 GMT -6
I want some of the stuff your dreams are made of, Brian! Wonderful series you have going!
Dan
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Post by Brian on Aug 18, 2018 12:28:59 GMT -6
I want some of the stuff your dreams are made of, Brian! Wonderful series you have going! Dan Thank you Dan. My lady muse has been in overdrive for over twenty years. I'd be lost if she abandoned me.
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 18, 2018 19:24:17 GMT -6
I can sure testify to that fact since I have known you, Brian.
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Post by Brian on Aug 21, 2018 3:53:34 GMT -6
She's still going strong. I have another story in the works. Taking a while with this one.
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Post by simpledip on Aug 31, 2018 20:51:59 GMT -6
She's still going strong. I have another story in the works. Taking a while with this one. Tell us the story, please Bows to the Story teller. - The Mountain Farmer who loves stories
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Post by QueenFoxy on Sept 1, 2018 18:21:58 GMT -6
He is surely a great storyteller, Dip.
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