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Post by Brian on Jul 11, 2018 20:42:04 GMT -6
Words flow like a stream from the pen,
Pen that is held by the hand of love,
Love that pours out from the heart,
Heart that beats to it's lover's rhythm,
Rhythm that keeps time with passing days,
Days that blend into nights of passions,
Passions that burst forth like flames,
Flames that give warmth of love's light,
Light that erases the fears of loneliness,
Loneliness that has evaporated into the void,
Void filled with a sweet caring presence,
Presence that inspires the flowing words.
Brian Paul Sullivan ©1998
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 11, 2018 22:31:53 GMT -6
I like how your words flow seamlessly through every line Brian and cleverly connect back to the first. Great write.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 12, 2018 5:28:07 GMT -6
You are so very good at this form, Brian; this is one of your best  |
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Post by Brian on Jul 12, 2018 10:38:03 GMT -6
I like how your words flow seamlessly through every line Brian and cleverly connect back to the first. Great write. Thank you Foxy. The Anadiplosis is a difficult form to master. If I remember correctly it has its origins in ancient Greece. |
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Post by Brian on Jul 12, 2018 10:39:12 GMT -6
You are so very good at this form, Brian; this is one of your best Thank you Rick. I love this one nearly as much as I do Quaterns and Sonnets. |
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 12, 2018 17:22:23 GMT -6
I am not a student of poetry, only a lover of poetry. Therefore, I am not familiar with all poetry forms, but this one is fascinating and I can see that it would be difficult. I really appreciate the thought that goes into this creative writing
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Post by simpledip on Jul 12, 2018 22:47:09 GMT -6
Words flow like a stream from the pen,
Pen that is held by the hand of love,
Love that pours out from the heart,
Heart that beats to it's lover's rhythm,
Rhythm that keeps time with passing days,
Days that blend into nights of passions,
Passions that burst forth like flames,
Flames that give warmth of love's light,
Light that erases the fears of loneliness,
Loneliness that has evaporated into the void,
Void filled with a sweet caring presence,
Presence that inspires the flowing words.
Brian Paul Sullivan ©1998 Thank you for the most difficult composition into words that touch deeply. I would not even dare to try to follow you Namaste. - Dip |
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Post by simpledip on Jul 12, 2018 22:55:55 GMT -6
Farmer tries to match
Brian's skill and thinking
Fails miserably and bows deeply.
~Dip
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Post by Brian on Jul 13, 2018 1:06:22 GMT -6
Words flow like a stream from the pen,
Pen that is held by the hand of love,
Love that pours out from the heart,
Heart that beats to it's lover's rhythm,
Rhythm that keeps time with passing days,
Days that blend into nights of passions,
Passions that burst forth like flames,
Flames that give warmth of love's light,
Light that erases the fears of loneliness,
Loneliness that has evaporated into the void,
Void filled with a sweet caring presence,
Presence that inspires the flowing words.
Brian Paul Sullivan ©1998 Thank you for the most difficult composition into words that touch deeply. I would not even dare to try to follow you Namaste. - Dip Thank you Namaste. |
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Post by Brian on Jul 13, 2018 1:17:12 GMT -6
Farmer tries to match Brian's skill and thinking Fails miserably and bows deeply. ~Dip Bows in return. |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 5, 2018 3:41:43 GMT -6
Yes, as said, it's sooooo smooth, so natural...much respect
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