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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 7, 2018 6:16:26 GMT -6
 Your heart sweetly calls out to mine,
Its voice a miracle on which I dine;
Your soul has a glow that reaches me
Across solemn miles, so tangibly.
I close my eyes and you are here;
In this life of shadows you are so dear:
Your warmth has led me out of the maze;
On your moonlight smiles, all my hope lays.
My dreams each night are now sublime;
Our embraces suspend the hands of time:
Each precious moment you hold me tight
Feels like forever, this must be right.
In the light of dawn you open my eyes:
Such love for you I cannot disguise:
Our fantasy romance is reality;
My beloved angel ... my destiny. |
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Post by Brian on Jul 7, 2018 7:10:33 GMT -6
Ah, those borders between dreams and waking that we want our best to cross. Beautifully expressed with a simple statement of belief. The feeling this gives is vibrant, the conviction carries through wonderfully.
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 7, 2018 7:41:06 GMT -6
I love this in between state which is so mysteriously wonderful; thank you for your much appreciated, eloquent praise Brian  |
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 8, 2018 0:29:50 GMT -6
*sigh* What a beautiful image of pure, sweet love. I can close my eyes and feel the tingle of emotion.  |
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 8, 2018 6:18:14 GMT -6
A sigh is a fantastic reaction to my poem, Foxy; thank you for your much appreciated compliments  |
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Post by susan on Jul 8, 2018 7:16:49 GMT -6
how beautiful rick
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 9, 2018 5:40:40 GMT -6
Thank you, Susan |
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 10, 2018 12:03:02 GMT -6
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 11, 2018 5:41:03 GMT -6
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Post by AquarianM on Jul 14, 2018 2:20:52 GMT -6
It's a beautiful thing when love works out. Your poem eloquently demonstrates this.
Dan
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 14, 2018 5:10:15 GMT -6
It sure is, Dan; thank you very much.
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