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Post by susan on May 20, 2018 15:41:59 GMT -6
this is from another forum, but doing it here, without the picture
susan
it's rare, a
white deer
a spirit one
do you see it
in a vision
in a dream
does it leap high
does it leap swiftly
with ease
maybe that's what i should
call this spirit
deer he who
runs swiftly
with the breeze
so if you ever
see a spirit deer
don't try to catch it
just close your
eyes and
let the memory linger
drats, i did have pictures of other deers, but for some reason it won't load on here
susan
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Post by oldarmybear on May 20, 2018 17:08:00 GMT -6
I have never seen an albino deer. However, your poem made me see him in my minds eye.
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Post by susan on May 20, 2018 17:16:49 GMT -6
aw thank you bear, much appreciated
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Post by lostineternity99 on May 20, 2018 17:23:43 GMT -6
I would love to see your spirit deer, Susan! Excellent poem  |
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Post by goldenmyst on May 20, 2018 21:18:36 GMT -6
Enchanting in the highest Susan. Your spirit deer is elusive. My eyes would be wide with wonder to see one. Yet you painted the image of this mythical creature vividly with the brushstrokes of your words. This read like a Native American myth. I loved it.
John
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Post by QueenFoxy on May 22, 2018 9:39:33 GMT -6
You paint a beautiful image, Susan.
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Post by susan on May 30, 2018 7:45:16 GMT -6
thank you guys...much appreciated
susan
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Post by AquarianM on Jun 28, 2018 23:34:14 GMT -6
Very dream-like and peaceful.
Dan
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Post by susan on Jun 29, 2018 6:27:58 GMT -6
thank you dan...
susan
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Post by Brian on Jun 29, 2018 19:50:01 GMT -6
This reminds me of the mediation to find one's spirit guide. An albino deer was a rare one. You made the whole thing vivid to my mind's eye.
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 1, 2018 23:02:06 GMT -6
Your imagery was crystal clear even without the accompanying pics. I love how your poems read like fairy tales full of wisdom. Enjoyed this thoroughly my friend. John |
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Post by susan on Jul 2, 2018 7:39:05 GMT -6
now that's a beautiful thing to say, thank you
it was for a challenge, in april, on a board that i belong to, 30 poems in 30 days...for poetry month...
thank you john, thank you brian, and so happy to see you back and posting.....
stay cool ok....john, not sure what your temperature is, but where brian and i live, it's hot, as all get out....
i have heard that there was like 15,000 people on parliament hill yesterday for the july 1 festivities, where they usually have like 200,000 don't they, that's how hot it was.......there, and why people didn't come
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Post by Brian on Jul 8, 2018 21:35:42 GMT -6
Great answer to part of the challenge. I've done the 30 in 30 challenges a few times. I still have some of the collections from those. Thank you. I'm getting a little better at it these days. Still just taking things as I can and not worrying about the rest Parliament Hill's celebration was certainly down quite a bit this year. I'm sorry to say it wasn't just the heat that kept people away. Our country isn't what it once was and people don't just know it, they feel it. |
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Post by susan on Jul 10, 2018 10:12:26 GMT -6
glad you're getting better brian
got you....
yes, it used to be packed, but i think that some kept away too because of all the extra security when it was there last year some weren't even allowed in, and i think that's what kept a few away this year...
warrented, it was, but still,
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