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Post by AquarianM on Nov 7, 2019 23:53:01 GMT -6
The Human Hours... Don't get me wrong, Workaholic stoicism has its place, Most particularly in the hearts of those who count beans, Yet even they have a heartbeat, Draw breath, And reach for the flush handle. The toughest talk still stifles a yawn, Has to lay down their head, Stumble sleepy and vulnerable, Deep in the Human hours. All business All day, All child in PJ's all night. AquarianM By: Daniel A. Stafford © 12/01/2019
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Post by lostineternity99 on Nov 8, 2019 5:18:35 GMT -6
I like this line of thinking, Dan and prefer those night time fun hours! Really good writing; it is good to see your poem shown hand written
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Post by susan on Nov 8, 2019 8:53:44 GMT -6
awesome, and i love your writing dan
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 8, 2019 12:01:18 GMT -6
I like this line of thinking, Dan and prefer those night time fun hours! Really good writing; it is good to see your poem shown hand written Rick, thank you. I usually write on paper just before going to sleep, and transcribe it to digital the next day. At least that's been my process for the past year or so. Dan
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 8, 2019 12:03:00 GMT -6
awesome, and i love your writing dan Thank you, Susan. I find poetry an excellent reason to stay in practice. I think poetry and cursive writing are a natural pairing. Dan
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Post by simpledip on Nov 9, 2019 7:06:04 GMT -6
Dan, "All business all day all child in PJ's all night"
- True. Brilliant poem. Namaste. - Dip
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 9, 2019 19:04:55 GMT -6
Dan, "All business all day all child in PJ's all night" - True. Brilliant poem. Namaste. - Dip Dip, thank you. I believe all of us retain our "inner child" throughout life. Dan
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Post by Catlady2710 on Nov 15, 2019 10:25:02 GMT -6
Good one!
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 15, 2019 11:51:08 GMT -6
Thank you, Cat!
Dan
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Post by Deleted on Nov 27, 2019 2:50:33 GMT -6
I'm the same way. I have to write it out first on paper and then type it up..have tried writing just on the computer and have never been able to do it..has to be on paper first. Goes along with the reading i suppose..have to have the book in my hands, can't read on a kindle.
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Post by AquarianM on Nov 28, 2019 2:30:20 GMT -6
I'm the same way. I have to write it out first on paper and then type it up..have tried writing just on the computer and have never been able to do it..has to be on paper first. Goes along with the reading i suppose..have to have the book in my hands, can't read on a kindle. Thank you, Michael. I can write either way, as long as it's a real keyboard and not a tiny touch screen. I prefer writing on paper first mostly because I just miss using a pen and paper, and because Love the look and feel of cursive handwriting. It's as unique as a fingerprint, and carries a lot more personality than text on a screen. Dan
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Post by goldenmyst on Dec 2, 2019 21:12:57 GMT -6
Dan this opened up a new view of life for me. I never considered how the toughest guy on the job can take off that mask at home and just relax. You really wrote this well.
John
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Post by AquarianM on Dec 5, 2019 1:51:12 GMT -6
Dan this opened up a new view of life for me. I never considered how the toughest guy on the job can take off that mask at home and just relax. You really wrote this well. John Thank you, John. We're all only human after all. Dan
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