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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 2:05:01 GMT -6
My Used To Be Me~
My used to be me seen it all through hot Summer endings, soft shoulder proud, and unbending.
A mental August letter, stampless, meaningless..to some, closing left undone.
To the Dearest gift of time written in heat, Recall licked in bitter-sweet, faded ink follows the cool beckon of Fall, not knowing the Fleet of it all.
Wishes meant in such Earnest Light, the yearly passage Rite, My puff of candle wax Smoke, My used to be me..
©Augustsky
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 18, 2019 8:07:05 GMT -6
Lovely m'lady, both poem and song.
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Post by simpledip on Aug 18, 2019 21:58:32 GMT -6
Bows deeply .. Thank you for sharing. Namaste
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Post by Deleted on Aug 19, 2019 3:02:09 GMT -6
You are amazing....you really are... Sky....I fall in love with everything you write
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Post by lostineternity99 on Aug 19, 2019 4:45:46 GMT -6
Such a beautiful, wistful poem Sky ... I love it
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Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 19, 2019 14:18:00 GMT -6
Beautifully written
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Post by augustsky on Aug 20, 2019 0:34:28 GMT -6
Thanks to All of you, each reply brightened my day & left me with a smile.
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 24, 2019 19:21:47 GMT -6
Sky, I read your poem, then watched the video, and then read your poem again. This has to be one of the peaks of readership for me. The wistful passion of your poem coupled seasons ending and seasons beginning into a softly enchanting melody of words.
Xo John
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Post by augustsky on Aug 28, 2019 21:56:34 GMT -6
Poet John, You have a wonderful insight..& way of putting things..Thank you. I HAD to edit this one..it was calling out for it.
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Post by augustsky on Aug 28, 2019 22:00:49 GMT -6
Thanks again to..Foxy, Dip, Michael, Rick, Cat, John
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 29, 2019 21:23:57 GMT -6
Sky your revision is fantastic! You really edited from top to bottom. Enjoyed revisiting this very much. Love the mental mail lines and all the rest. Xo John
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Post by Deleted on Aug 30, 2019 1:50:15 GMT -6
Is awesome
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Post by augustsky on Sept 24, 2019 13:53:15 GMT -6
Hugs & Thanks to John & Michael..
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Post by AquarianM on Sept 26, 2019 0:47:55 GMT -6
Sky, this is impressive, beautiful, deep, and full of nostalgic angst. I couldn't think of a better love letter to a younger self.
Dan
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Post by oldarmybear on Sept 26, 2019 10:51:42 GMT -6
Well done, Sky. I would love to read the pre edit version, too.
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Post by augustsky on Oct 8, 2019 18:13:45 GMT -6
Like the way you put that Dan, Thank you Sky~
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Post by augustsky on Oct 8, 2019 18:14:47 GMT -6
Think I threw that out lol Thank you Bear.
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