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Post by susan on Aug 13, 2019 19:12:14 GMT -6
there stands a tree one of legend one where a woman waited for her beloved but, all she had was time he was to return to her that night her hero, but it wasn't to be, so she sat beside the tree and wept why do you weep so my queen, the tree asked. the woman was astonished, for not only was a tree speaking to her, but it sounded just like her beloved. but this cannot be she said, how can it be, she said again, and stood up. they brought me back as a tree, what i've always wanted to be come, here into my branches, and you will find me embrace you, just like i used to. what did she have to loose she didn't want to wake up and find out it wasn't real, so she stood up bright and tall, and she was embraced but yet in the end she knew it was not to be, for the tree, was still a tree, but in some way she got to say goodbye to her beloved all on that magical night Susan
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Post by Deleted on Aug 14, 2019 2:07:35 GMT -6
Oh wow...this is painfully sweet...great write
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Post by Catlady2710 on Aug 14, 2019 10:46:32 GMT -6
Nicely done Susan.
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Post by susan on Aug 14, 2019 18:43:15 GMT -6
thank you cat
thank you micheal
much appreciated
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Post by lostineternity99 on Aug 15, 2019 6:07:48 GMT -6
Fabulous!
This is my kind of poem, Susan *applauds*
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Post by QueenFoxy on Aug 15, 2019 9:15:17 GMT -6
I love the magic and pure fantasy in this write, Susan.
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:41:47 GMT -6
I'm a tree-hugger..absolutely, this was Lovely susan.
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Post by goldenmyst on Aug 24, 2019 21:01:31 GMT -6
Susan, your tender portrayal of the woman and the tree sang a melody in my heart. The ending was a surprise which is the best way to end a story. And her getting closure from her dream left me spellbound. Love your art, my friend.
John
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