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Post by augustsky on Jul 26, 2019 13:48:20 GMT -6
Indigo Thoughts~
Brilliant flashes of golden pinks and violets light my sky-theater, transitions back to velvet Indigo and deep plum, accompanied by rumbles of discontent.. all within this 3:30 AM ponder, my indigo thoughts with a chaser of rain.
Alone in the night facing East, watching the storm inch its way towards me, held transfixed with a desperate need for answers. Where did the true me disappear to through all these years.. perhaps I'm hidden in a Poem somewhere..
Cool drops upon forehead & cheek, sweet reprieve from sweltering heat and Indigo thoughts, now..embraced by a chaser of R a I n
©Augustsky
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Post by Catlady2710 on Jul 26, 2019 16:30:55 GMT -6
Loved this!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 27, 2019 2:49:30 GMT -6
Very cool read here Sky love how you let the energy flow into your words. I love writing with a good storm going on...seems to charge me or something...strange...same with the full moon. Sometimes I grow long teeth too but usually I can catch it early and keep it from progressing too far....awesome read
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Post by lostineternity99 on Jul 27, 2019 5:06:05 GMT -6
Hey Sky, This is fabulous writing! I love how you presented your words so stylishly ... storms are changing too, now inching along instead of blowing in. You remain Sky, poetess supreme
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Post by QueenFoxy on Jul 27, 2019 19:06:14 GMT -6
Beautiful, Sky. I love it.
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Post by simpledip on Jul 27, 2019 20:26:30 GMT -6
Bows deeply to Sky.
I fully agree with Rick - "You remain Sky, poetess supreme"
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Post by goldenmyst on Jul 30, 2019 23:46:51 GMT -6
Enchanting imagery coupled with deep introspection which makes for an exhilarating read. A gem of a poem.
John
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:27:27 GMT -6
Thank you so much Cat, pleased you liked.
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:31:52 GMT -6
Hmmm.. Michael..funny how a storm, or the moon can just take one over, maybe a shape-shifting thing going on there. Thanks my Friend..
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:34:03 GMT -6
Rick, You sweet-talker-you! Thanks Friend..
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:35:11 GMT -6
Thank you Dear Foxy, glad you liked it.
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:36:34 GMT -6
Dip, I'm humbled at your kind reply. Thank you Poet..
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Post by augustsky on Aug 18, 2019 1:38:09 GMT -6
Poet John, you always give 'Gem' replies. Thank you..
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